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First Paragraph Prompt 3

I believe the age a person is considered mature enough to assume adulthood is the age of 18. At the of 18 you are able to join the Army. The age of 18 you can register and vote for the president. Joining the Army shows adulthood because you are serving for your country and shows maturity. Lastly you are considered legal and can live on your own and move away from your parents. Registering to vote shows that you care about the country and that you are maturing and making your own decisions. Living on your own and moving to colleges and apartments shows that you are moving on and growing up. The age of 18 is an age of great maturity as you prepare for the rest of your life

First paragraph of Great Thoughts

“Great thoughts only speak to a thoughtful mind, but great actions speak to all humankind” means that actions speak louder than words. Great thoughts do not always apply to all people. In order to understand great thoughts you have to be a thinker and understand deeper meaning and thought. As for great actions, anyone can understand an action. Because they way news travels great actions will be understood by the whole world because the of fast communication. A great action will live on forever because of news and talk. As for great thoughts they will only be remembered by those who read. This why actions speak louder than words.

New and Improved

If I were to design a product that blends form and function, I would create an iphone that could send picture messages. It would come in different colors. Everyone could have their favorite colors for example; blue, red, orange, pink, purple, or maroon. The new iphone would be able to send picture messages. Would be able to send picture messages via a text message which would be easier than sending an email. If you go on a trip you can send your family pictures. For example if you go to the grand canyon you can take a picture and send it to your friends and family. Having this capability it would make the future of sending pictures much easier.

This new product would be able to be personialized or customized to fit the person well. Along with colors and memory size the person can do what ever they want to it. The colors available can be as basic as blue or as complex as bright pink or neon colors. Memory can be customized to fit the needs of the user. If the person takes a lot of pictures and things of that nature they can get more memory space. But, for the person who doesn’t need all that memory they can just buy the stock phone. This new feature will make it so that not one person has the same phone. The phone will also have many other new capabilites.

This Iphone can now send picture messages. This cuts out the idea of sending pictures via email. With this new feature it will allow people to send and recieve pictures from other Iphone users as well as people using other phones. With this feature the Iphone has all the capabilities of camera so they won’t be a need for one anymore. Now people can take pictures and instead of having to go through the email process they can save it to there phone and attach it to a text message. This way will be much more convient than having to figured out the person email address and attaching the file and so on. The new and improved Iphone will replace the camera all together.

People may have a phone, a camera, and a GPS. This can get very cluttered and you may replace more than one thing. Since the Iphone already has GPS bulit it just needs a camera with picture sending capabilites. With this capability all three of those things will be fit into one therefore creating more space in your purse or bag. This is the future phone with all the capabilities it will now have. With this it will be the most diverse phone be able to do many different things.

This will benefit soceity because it will simplify sending pictures texts, maxamize the idea of customization, and will replace many different things and prevent clutter in your purse or bags. This prodcut will catch your eye and make you want to buy. This product will fix any flaws in the old Iphones and will be the best product this year.

The most important technological invention? I believe its the car.

By far the most important technological invention that benefits society is the automobile. The automobile or car if you will is essential to transportation. Without the use of a car you would not be able to get from point A to point B as quickly. The automobile is a big help when it comes to transfering goods from place to place. The automobile is a reason why we can help out other countries so well. the automobile has also given many people job oppturnites. this has allowed many people to have jobs involving the ability to drive.

The automobile is essential to transportation for that fact that it is the only way we get around anymore. How many people now a days walk places. Not many, the use of the car has become important over the years. When it was first invented it was more of a priviledge to drive. Now, its a must. Without a car you may not be able to get work or even have a job. Another part of transportation is going on vacation.

As you know you cannot walk everywhere in the world. You will need a car to get to your vacation spot. Often you will need a car to even get to places when you are on vacation. Automobiles are also a very easy way to get goods to other countries. Although planes and trains are used to transport goods big trucks are cheaper. Automobiles can carry a large amount of goods across most of the nation. It is cheaper fee. It is easier for the companies to have people drive their product than to pay other companies to fly their product. the automobile has also provided many people with jobs and job oppurtnites.

The automobile has given many people job oppurtnies. for example there is many people who drive trucks because they like the hours and like how laid back the job is. the companies pay them to drive state lines to their other plants. another job is taxi drivers. without the car this job would not exist. this also help the people get from point a to point b. without cars and buses people would not being able to have jobs because they would not be able to drive to work. also people would not be able to work outside of the state for the reason they wont have a car to drive.

I believe that the automobile is the most important technological invention because it helps people get from point a to point b quicker. this helps people when they have to drive far away from their house. it also a good way to transport products from one company to another. without that companies wouldnt be able to share products. also, it creats job oppturnites from people. without cars taxi drivers, bus drivers, and truck drivers would be out of a job.

Game by Walter Dean Myers

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